Woo hoo! Congratulations! You have some fancy stuff in there (especially those backwards crossing steps - don't know what they're called, but I'd be scared to death to try them!).
If I had to give some constructive criticism, it would be (as you already know) don't look down, keep your body posture upright, and work on keeping your arms/hands outstretched and strong/tight.
But wow, good job....and Happy Skating Birthday!!
Rene